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guy fawkes

Created On: 02/01/2010 00:50:24

thanks for sharing how to write poetry! i enjoyed it a great deal.
Feedback from MrDaMan: You're welcome, I enjoyed it as well. An excellent piece to share

pmac58

Created On: 01/30/2010 11:09:04

Randy, I really enjoyed Why Atlas Shrugged. Very existential. The ending gave me a good chuckle. Great work, my man.
Feedback from MrDaMan: LOL and TY PMac, the ending surprised me too. One of those pieces that just sorta fell together... rather than apart. heheh

Myrtle Thomas

Created On: 01/21/2010 15:03:54

I very much enjoyed you Another Day Another Dollar.Sounds like reality , very deep and well written.
Feedback from MrDaMan: Thank you Myrtle, my muse was rather moody this morning.

Nomar Knight

Created On: 01/10/2010 12:11:49

Powerful poem. The yoke is upon all of us.

Nomar Knight

Created On: 01/06/2010 07:33:04

Hey my friend, The Box, don't we all have to conform to society's wishes since we make up part of society? Any attempt at living outside the box and you'll be labeled an outcast. So are we crammed inside or outside looking in? I love your philosophical view. Keep up the good work.
Feedback from MrDaMan: Ha Don't box me in! Good to see you again amigo TY

Calliope

Created On: 01/02/2010 13:42:24

I love BGK! Especially:
I am not Bukowski but I've seen the bottom of a bottle.

Wow. I wish I'd written that line.
Feedback from MrDaMan: Thank you Calliope, it truly is a lens to another world, err variation of reality.

shedances

Created On: 01/01/2010 15:17:47

I knew you were a softy. You sound like a tortured Libra walking the tightrope of balance.
Loved it......trip......ooopps where did you land?
Put down the sticks. They just ain't keeping me away.
Hey perhaps they were subliminal after all.
love and hugs
deborah
Feedback from MrDaMan: A Capricorn actually, scrabbling on the rocks climbing the mountain, making SURE not to fall. Great sense of balance but peeing in the wind all the time. XOXO right back!

CharlesOfAustin

Created On: 01/01/2010 12:29:30

It's All True:

I wonder if it's all true - if that is the real you or you're just making it up as you go along. This is certainly a moving piece and (true or not) a well-done look deep within. I like it a lot.
Feedback from MrDaMan: Thank you Charles, it is AND it isn't. Honest poetry has to draw from the truth but then it also has to be exaggerated to be entertaining.
So ... Yes .... and .... No


shedances

Created On: 12/29/2009 19:38:47

Tick, Tick, Tock....the video was on stutter for me but I filled in your voice and read it.
Very nice and tres melancholy. I'm into the blues today.
I hope it is a great New Year for us all.
love and hugs
deborah
Feedback from MrDaMan: Aye may 2010 be much better than the last.

Calliope

Created On: 12/29/2009 12:04:34

Tick, Tick, Tock...this one rocks! (okay, that was lame coming from me. I can see my son rolling his eyes) How 'bout brilliant! Yeah, I like that better.

My favorite line...
The bones of our ancestors,
yesterday’s sand in our craw
embracing us with what’s left of theirs…

Feedback from MrDaMan: Thank you Calliope Happy New Year M'Lady may you and yours roll your rocks in comfort.

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Member Since 03/09/2008
Gender: Male
City: El Cajon
State/Province: Ca
Country: United States
Genre(s): Sci-Fi, Philosophical Poetry/Prose, Political

About Me

About Me:
As a kid I wanted to be a writer and got a type writer but couldn’t figure out what to write. I would stare at a blank sheet of paper and go humm. I learned how to type in high school and in my tweens my roommates would laugh because when I got upset or angry they would know, due to the sound of the clacking keyboard emanating from my room.

I actually got paid 35 dollars once for an article on paintball in a sports magazine. I once had a full length article published in a local beach newspaper on politics and several letters to the editor in the San Diego Tribune.

I have the curse of enjoying philosophical political debate and will write from time to time opinion pieces. But for the most part I often just write short prose pieces on philosophical perspectives. It could be about anything, I’ve been told I have a knack for sentiment writing but I haven’t a clue how to go about pursuing that professionally.

Other than creative writing in high school and Jr. College I have no formal training, that’s usually enough for editors to ignore me. I write because I like too, it helps clarify and define my thoughts, if that’s all I get out of it. So be it.

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Muse... What is it? Whenever it hits I follow it, sometimes it go's somewhere some times not. Adventures, physical or of mind and spirit, I gotta see .... whats next!

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..[video:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AzfNEwT0s3c 400x400] Exponential Potentialby MrDaManVirgil R. Hall II (Randy)Once upon a conceptfar, far ...
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– Wednesday, February 03 2010 –
..Ice Creamby MrDaManVirgil R. Hall II (Randy)It was a superstitious huncha thought that went blinking across the milky way…Better to stea...
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– Sunday, January 31 2010 –
.. How to Write Poetryby Percy Bysshe Shelley    January, 1810Here I sit with my paper, my pen and my inkA Person complained that ...
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– Friday, January 29 2010 –
..[video:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PYnYcPKoDEU 400x400] Blood and Pornby MrDaManVirgil R. Hall II (Randy)Skirts and trousers, blood and bone...
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– Thursday, January 28 2010 –
..Thunder in the Mindby MrDaManVirgil R. Hall II (Randy)So what is it that you want?Just what is your desire?A salve to soothe the soulor an axe to gr...
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– Monday, January 25 2010 –
..Odds and Endsby MrDaManVirgil R. Hall II (Randy)I have all these odds and endsscattered about my lifethey tend to clop, ping and muff about.They don...
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– Friday, January 22 2010 –
..Why Atlas Shruggedby MrDaManVirgil R. Hall II (Randy)It’s a superficial weightbut heavy none the lessa burden that Atlas couldn’t shrug ...
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– Wednesday, January 20 2010 –
..Another Day Another Dollarby MrDaManVirgil R. Hall II (Randy)There are days when the edge of reality is so sharpyou can cut a slice of fantasy and e...
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– Saturday, January 16 2010 –
..[video:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=alAOEaFDuOY 400x400] Heroby MrDaManVirgil R. Hall II (Randy)"I am the pendulum that never settles in...
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– Thursday, January 14 2010 –
..War and peACeby MrDaManVirgil R. Hall II (Randy)Peace was bloodied and injured by shrapnel from an over zealous concept.The p almost severed, the e&...
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