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pitdog

Created On: 08/22/2010 00:46:29

SUNDAGGER: Still a classic!

Waterfallzzz

Created On: 07/22/2010 05:23:38
Edited By Waterfallzzz On: 07/22/2010 05:29:31


STill; can't help myself - your sun is absolutely beautiful, you have to look deep into it. If only for a moment. It's cool seeing the gases flying out of it. Blinding this early, but worth the squint. "Better" is very good. I have a problem with the word regurgitate - it fits perfectly in this write, thanks.
Feedback from G.P.: Actually it's our sun (Sol) and a wounder it is.
"Mama always told me not to look into the eyes of the sun" Thanks for the feedback


Physician/Poet

Created On: 07/21/2010 14:38:12

"Better" is an interesting piece. Thanx for sharing.
Feedback from G.P.: Thanks for reading

multiplex

Created On: 06/17/2010 18:17:18

Intent well done

There is only do and do not. - yoda
Feedback from G.P.: Now let's blow this thing and go home......

Double G spot

Created On: 04/24/2010 12:58:23

Intent it's all about the Rhythm
here - good job!
Feedback from G.P.: Thanx GG

JamesGoiJr

Created On: 03/31/2010 16:29:40

WHITE:
I like it!
Hey Mikey!

Feedback from G.P.: Hey, that's LIFE!!!

JamesGoiJr

Created On: 03/31/2010 16:27:48

My pleasure! Thanks for the positive feedback!!


pitdog

Created On: 03/31/2010 15:20:03

As far as feeling bad about negativity goes. I will quote a great poet who I am confident you will recognize.

"O sun which casts all mists from troubled sight, such joy attends your rising, that I feel as grateful to the dark as to the light."

How's that for corn-ball??

pitdog

Created On: 03/28/2010 13:49:47

Battle Fatigued: I can identify!
Feedback from G.P.: I know if anybody could you would Dav. I'm tempted to turn that one into stone and send it to the archives as I'm not so pleased in creating anything so negative right now, and I find it uninviting at most. Over the top maybe??

pitdog

Created On: 03/21/2010 16:35:26

Orient: Very good writing! I think you are improving exponentially.
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About Me:
"There is a tide in the affairs of men which, taken at the flood, leads on to fortune; omitted, all the voyage of their life is bound in shallows and in miseries."

Julius Caesar, Act IV, Scene iii.



 "I decided that it was not wisdom that enabled [poets]  to write their poetry, but a kind of instinct or inspiration, such as you find in seers and prophets who deliver their sublime messages without knowing in the least what they mean."

Socrates


"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."

"So the writer who breeds more words than he needs is making a chore for the reader who reads."

Dr. Seuss
 

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