Re: Reading Hemingway Sample Challenge: A Moveable Feast
Ok for all you IGPS addicts (IGPS = Instantaneous Gratification / PlayStation)
Since you haven't bothered to go to a library and rent the book, or to the bookstore to buy the book, and then be brave enough to tell us about it:
Here is the straight poop on my reading of the first paragraph...
Right off the bat, in the very first sentence of the very first paragraph of the very first chapter, ol' Hemmmy goes right after the weather:
"Then there was the bad weather."
To this he builds-on as he adds, "It would come in one day when the fall was over." He continues right along the same line, "We would have to shut the windows in the night against the rain and the cold wind would strip the leaves from the trees in the Place Contrescarpe." Now picking up with the image of fallen leaves he adds, "The leaves lay sodden in the rain and the wind drove the rain against the big green autobus at the terminal and the Cafe' des Amateurs was crowded and the windows misted over from the heat and the smoke inside." Now running with that image he adds, "It was a sad, evilly run cafe' where the drunkards of the quarter crowded together and I kept away from it because of the smell of the dirty bodies and the sour smell of drunkenness."
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Now that's all you get till ya put in more quarters...
Miles Cobbett
AlaskaMiles

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